Critique my riding, please?

MAN he looks lazy! The only thing I would say is to try to push your heels down more and stop pumping with your upper body so your legs will stay still. I jump a lazy horse and I do the same things. It's really hard not to pump when you're squeezing so hard all the time but still, focus on going with the motion of the horse as you drive him forward. You'll find you get better distances to the fences. And you keep your shoulders back nicely, so that's good :)